The Kingdom (a story I'm writing)

The kingdom, also known as Jira (JI-ra) is a girl named Melody's hometown. Melody was a 21 year old woman, living alone in a small cottage near the castle. She worked as a baker, opening her own bakery near her home. The King, Fred, had fallen in love with Melody, making friends with her and eventually confessing. The two were married when Melody was 34, making Fred 37. The two had four children, Hailey and Kailey, the two eldest and are also twins, Lilac, the second youngest, and the youngest princess, Evelynn. Lilac was a blond with oddely shaped bangs, long slightly dirty blonde hair in a ponytail, bright light blue eyes, and freckles. Hailey and Kailey had freckles, blonde hair, Kailey with brown eyes and Hailey with hazel eyes. The four children got along well with the children in the kingdom. Evelynn had a best friend named Daisy.

Fred, however, began falling out of love with Melody. After a month, he demanded Evelynn be taken from Melody's care and brought to him. Melody went against this, packed up with Evelynn, and left the Kingdom. She took Evelynn to her best friend outside the Kingdom, and this was where Evelynn's journey started.

Evelynn grew up in her mothers best friends home, playing with animals that passed by the cottage in the woods, watching the sun in the evening, and playing with her mother. However, all of that changed when they were attacked by the King's troup. Fred demanded for Evelynn, Melody giving a no. Melody was taken to the dungeons, and was sent for exacution for disobeying Fred'd orders. Melody's best friend, Sapphira, sent Evelynn into the woods, telling her to run as far as possible. Evelynn was very hesitant, and refused to leave. Sapphire told her to go, or Evelynn may die. Evelynn gave Sapphire one last hug, ran to the edge of the woods, sent a last glance at Sapphire, and ran into the trees, crying. Her arm caught on a branch, causing a large rip in her shirt and a cut on her arm. She gasped in shock and pain and tumbled down a small hill into a creak. Her face went in the water, and she pulled herself out, gasping for air. She stood up and ran through the creak, to the other sode of the woods and found a large building, abandoned. Her curiousity made her walk inside. She coughed before continuing, and found a room. Pushing the door open, a loud creak was heard until her eyes were met with a blinding light. Her eyes adjusting, she found a room with several lights on the ceiling, and containers covered in mist. Rubbing the mist off of one, she backed away in horror. There were people in the containers. She rubbed the mist off of all of them, and rubbed the last one. A light brown short haired little girl was in this one. She had a small softly glowing halo and small white wings, like the angels she had seen in the kingdom. Evelynn's wolf tail wagged a bit. Evelynn pressed the button on the container, letting the little girl fall out onto former princess. Evelynn sighed and sat against the wall, the little girl on her lap. The little girl opened her eyes after about an hour, and looked up at Evelynn. Scared, she backed away, against the oppisite wall. After some soothing, the two girls found they had to leave the building and walked outside. There was a rustle in the bushes and the girls jumped. A black short haired boy stepped out. He had a little red tip on his bangs and short brown hair. His eyes were grey, and he was a cardinal, his wings flapping behind him. His eyes snapped up to Evelynn. The two recognized each other. This boy was one of her classmates from her school. The three talked fo a while. The girl's name was Opal, and her classmate was Eli. The three decided to start moving. That was only when a shout was heard behind them.

"You three! You're coming with me!"

the theee children scrambled up and ran, before Opal screamed. Opal was in a net, kicking and fighting. Eli shouted as he was dragged by a net. Evelynn tried to run, but got tangled in a pile of branches. She was dragged out and dragged to the abandoned building. There was a nice, clean room, and what Evelynn saw was horrifying.

there was a metal surgery table, three child height containers, and tools laid out on a table. Evelynn tried to scream, but was thrown onto the table, and strapped down. The man who had caught her had three people, all in white doctor outfits with white masks, were talking about things the young child didn't understand. They looked down. "Let's start." The man who had caught her said. He grabbed a loose strand of hair off of Evelynn's over-sized sweater, and studied it. He gave suddenly had a satisfied look on his face.